Issues Raised:
Double sided print on book?
Hard to understand/what are Paulios?
What is the collection?
Possible remove numbers from facts in book, as it looks randomly placed? (although categorised by decade)
How would it be promoted?
Who is the audience?Action to Be Taken:
Look at the way the book is put together.
Have the book as a more focal part of the project.
Make clearer who the audience is.
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