Final Crit

The final and most useful crit, I think I got most ouut of this crit, good fedback an lots to concider and work on. I know I need to work on a wider range of products for the exhibition, not only the Zine and the Advertisement through posters, banners and billboards. time permitting I will endeavour to apply some of my feed back to my work, especially the promo materials. 

Concept Crit 19/10/2011

The crit was very beneficial, it made me realise the holes in my project and knowledge of what I was trying to produce, I fell now that my idea was on a small scale, not pushing any boundaries . Through talking with the people in my group I can now go away and re evaluate where I am with my good and how I plan to deliver it. 

Wrap it up Crit

Strengths 

Very strong design.

Linning up with packaging is smart.

Scaling range of packageing.

Colour pallet works well.

Proffesional asthetics. 

Using acetate is a good finishing quality. 

Areas for improvement

Would be more refined if the logo is vectorised. logo is complex, possibly too much.

Could focus a rocket imagery for logo.

Stay clear of live trace.

See how the design works when uncentred.